OT Slenderman

So a while ago I was writing a script for my film class. My original idea was to write about a boy losing his dog and getting a red panda but my teacher heard me talking about Slenderman, and told me to write a script about him. Here is the first few scenes.


EXT. ELEMENTARY SCHOOL DOORS NIGHT

A large school looms over a small sitting on the front steps. The boy is illuminated by car headlights. He wears a name tag that says JACK. He peels it off and throws it on the ground. The car headlights pull back and disappear. The car drives off. The shadows of two figures pass over Jack. Jack follows the shadows.

EXT. ELEMENTARY SCHOOL PLAYGROUND NIGHT

JACK sits beneath two shadows on a jungle gym. CANDLE walks up. Jack stands.

AIDEN moves forward into the light.


MARY stands, scratching her arm.


Candle grabs Jack. He falls. Candle repeatedly punches him. Jack reverses the situation.


Jack spits on her.

EXT. PORCH NIGHT

A woman holds a child to her chest. A bony hand grabs the woman's face. The child's body falls to porch. Smoke curls from the woman's face.

EXT. ELEMENTARY PLAYGROUND NIGHT

A loud scream occurs. The kids stand up. A fire breaks out in a nearby house.


EXT. BENEATH JUNGLE GYM NIGHT

Mary and Aiden lie on their stomachs underneath the jungle gym. A white head moves in the distance.


A white hand grabs Aiden's ankle. Aiden turns around. The hand is gone.


Aiden stands up. He knocks his head on the jungle gym.


Another pair of hands grabs Aiden's ankles. Aiden falls. Mary runs out of the jungle gym.

EXT. ELEMENTARY PLAYGROUND NIGHT

Mary runs. Candle and Jack follow her.


Jack grabs and slaps Mary.


Jack shoves Candle. A white head appears.

Candle, Jack, and Mary start to run.

It´s okay, but a good idea would be if it was played like the Blair Witch Project, with the whole amauteur camera and psychological horror

EXT. CANDLE'S PORCH NIGHT

The three children are on a porch with a stone frog. Candle sticks her hand in the mailbox, she pulls out a picture of a heart and throws it away.


Jacks sit down and cries.


Mary finds a key beneath the stone frog. In the distance a tall figure watches her.

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Candle takes the key. Jack wipes his nose on his sleeve.


Jack glares at Candle. A white head appears in the distance behind Jack's left shoulder.


Candle opens the door.


INT. CANDLE'S LIVING ROOM NIGHT

In the living room there are three doors. The front door, a door at the back of the room, and a side door. Candle, Jack and Mary walk towards the front door. Next to the front door is a large window. Jack leaves the room through the back door. The curtains are drawn.


Candle looks at Mary.


Candle opens the back door.

INT. CANDLE'S KITCHEN NIGHT

There are two doors in the kitchen, a red door and a blue door. The children walk through the red door.


Candle scratches her head.


Candle and Jack look at each other.


A naked, YOUNG WOMAN appears behind Jack. She wears a hospital gown and is covered in blood.


The Young Woman grabs Jack's throat.


INT. CANDLE'S LIVING ROOM NIGHT

The children play cards on a coffee table. An empty box of crackers sits next to them. Candle reaches for the box. A cockroach crawls out of the box.

Candle pulls Jack towards the room's back door.

INT. CANDLE'S KITCHEN NIGHT

Candle and Jack enter the kitchen through the kitchen's blue door.


Jack sticks his tongue out.


Mary enters.

Mary points at the red door.


Candle walks to the fridge and pulls out an apple.


Candle takes her apple over to the sink. She opens a drawer and takes out a knife. She waves the knife at Jack.

Candle jams her knife into the apple.


Candle struggles to remove the knife from the apple.


Candle turns to face Jack. Jack stares back.


A white head appears behind Candle.


Jack looks at the floor.

A white head moves to the window behind Candle.

A loud knocking occurs. Candle grabs the knife. The children run toward the red door. A bowl of sliced apples sits on the counter.