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The inactivity of this forum.
Thu Apr 02, 2015 11:06 pm by Burkman
It's depressing to see how inactive it has been recently. I mean, everybody is pretty much primarily posting in the never ending thread now and there's not enough people here to make this place really booming. We need to find some way to bring more people here before this place just fades into nothingness...

I know for a fact that a lot of boards out there are thriving because of how many people are there. We just need to get back into the game and pull people here. However, where we obtain these people might matter, because we don't to end up pulling in douches like those at Selkath.

I understand that people are busy these days, but it doesn't seem like they're rarely at their computer anymore. I know most of you are still dicking around with your computer. I don't know how we …

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Happy New Year!
Wed Jan 02, 2013 2:56 pm by Scott
Happy New Year OT! We may be dying... BUT WE'RE STILL HERE! We had an... interesting year last year. Vice Admin Burkman is taking a long earned vacation and Uly is stepping into his position. Well... I'd have more to say but I've got other things to do atm... and oh yeah... to quote Callin... "GET A MIC YA BUM!"

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PostSubject: OT Slenderman   Sun Aug 26, 2012 8:53 pm

So a while ago I was writing a script for my film class. My original idea was to write about a boy losing his dog and getting a red panda but my teacher heard me talking about Slenderman, and told me to write a script about him. Here is the first few scenes.


EXT. ELEMENTARY SCHOOL DOORS NIGHT

A large school looms over a small sitting on the front steps. The boy is illuminated by car headlights. He wears a name tag that says JACK. He peels it off and throws it on the ground. The car headlights pull back and disappear. The car drives off. The shadows of two figures pass over Jack. Jack follows the shadows.

EXT. ELEMENTARY SCHOOL PLAYGROUND NIGHT

JACK sits beneath two shadows on a jungle gym. CANDLE walks up. Jack stands.

JACK

Go away. Go away. Go away. Candle I don't want you around on my bad day.

CANDLE

Shut up Jack.
AIDEN moves forward into the light.

AIDEN

Jack's parents forgot him Candle. He is not feeling well.

JACK

My parents did not forget me. Shut up Aiden. They're just late. Your dad forgot you. My parents are coming.

CANDLE

All of your parents are dead.

MARY stands, scratching her arm.

MARY

Why?

JACK

Why what?

MARY

Why are my parents dead?

JACK

Because she's an idiot. She is a liar. She is a fat ugly liar.

Candle grabs Jack. He falls. Candle repeatedly punches him. Jack reverses the situation.

JACK

Don't you touch me. Don't you ever touch me!

Jack spits on her.

CANDLE

It's okay. It is only because you're a coward. You don't want to be die like your mom. Or disappear like your dad.

JACK

You are lying my dad loves me. My dad is coming to get me. You are going to disappear. I want you to disappear.

MARY

Don't say that. My mom said that once and then she disappeared.
EXT. PORCH NIGHT

A woman holds a child to her chest. A bony hand grabs the woman's face. The child's body falls to porch. Smoke curls from the woman's face.

EXT. ELEMENTARY PLAYGROUND NIGHT

A loud scream occurs. The kids stand up. A fire breaks out in a nearby house.

CANDLE

Hide.

EXT. BENEATH JUNGLE GYM NIGHT

Mary and Aiden lie on their stomachs underneath the jungle gym. A white head moves in the distance.

MARY

What was that Aiden?

AIDEN

I don't see anything.

A white hand grabs Aiden's ankle. Aiden turns around. The hand is gone.

MARY

What?

AIDEN

Nothing.

Aiden stands up. He knocks his head on the jungle gym.

AIDEN

Ouch.

MARY

Sorry.

A pair of hands grabs Aiden's head and pulls him backwards.

MARY

That's not what I meant! I didn't do that. That's not me.

Another pair of hands grabs Aiden's ankles. Aiden falls. Mary runs out of the jungle gym.

EXT. ELEMENTARY PLAYGROUND NIGHT

Mary runs. Candle and Jack follow her.

MARY

It's not my fault. I didn't do it.

JACK

Where is Aiden?

MARY

It's not my fault! It's not my fault!

Jack grabs and slaps Mary.

JACK

What did you do?

CANDLE

She didn't do anything! Don't you listen?

Jack shoves Candle. A white head appears.

CANDLE

We should go.

JACK

Why? I want to know what she did! She needs to answer.

MARY

It. It. It grabbed him. It took him away.

CANDLE

Are you happy now?

JACK

No! She needs to be punished.

CANDLE

You'll be punished if you stay here.

JACK

Yeah? By who.

CANDLE

By my father.

JACK

Shut up.
Candle, Jack, and Mary start to run.

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PostSubject: Re: OT Slenderman   Sat Sep 01, 2012 9:28 am

It´s okay, but a good idea would be if it was played like the Blair Witch Project, with the whole amauteur camera and psychological horror
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PostSubject: Re: OT Slenderman   Sat Sep 01, 2012 5:11 pm

Mine Turtle wrote:
It´s okay, but a good idea would be if it was played like the Blair Witch Project, with the whole amauteur camera and psychological horror

Yeah but everyone has done that with slenderman at this point.

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PostSubject: Re: OT Slenderman   Tue Sep 04, 2012 8:44 pm

EXT. CANDLE'S PORCH NIGHT

The three children are on a porch with a stone frog. Candle sticks her hand in the mailbox, she pulls out a picture of a heart and throws it away.

JACK

You can't even get into your own house. We should have gone to my house.

CANDLE

You burned your house down.

JACK

What are you talking about?

CANDLE

Why were you alone after school?

JACK

Because I wanted to be.

CANDLE

Where was your mother to pick you up?

JACK

She was late but she was coming.

CANDLE

Jack be nimble Jack be quick. Jack don't knock over the ashtray.

JACK

No I didn't!

CANDLE

Then your mom left you at school because you bit her.

JACK

Shut up. Shut up.

Jacks sit down and cries.



CANDLE

And the shark it has teeth. And it wears them in it's face.

Mary finds a key beneath the stone frog. In the distance a tall figure watches her.

MARY

Hey Candle, I found this
.

Candle takes the key. Jack wipes his nose on his sleeve.

MARY

Is he okay?

CANDLE

If he is a big boy he is.

Jack glares at Candle. A white head appears in the distance behind Jack's left shoulder.

CANDLE

Thanks.

MARY

You're welcome.

Candle opens the door.


INT. CANDLE'S LIVING ROOM NIGHT

In the living room there are three doors. The front door, a door at the back of the room, and a side door. Candle, Jack and Mary walk towards the front door. Next to the front door is a large window. Jack leaves the room through the back door. The curtains are drawn.

MARY

You have a pretty house.

CANDLE

I guess. Where do you live Mary?

MARY

Beneath the school. Aiden keeps me warm. Like Jack tried to keep his mom warm.

Candle looks at Mary.

MARY

Jack didn't burn down his house. He just wanted to keep his mom warm. Aiden sometimes burns my clothes to keep us warm.


CANDLE

He is a bad person. He lit his mother on fire and watched her burn. He didn't want to keep her warm.

MARY

Why would he do that?

CANDLE

I heard his mom asked him too.

Candle opens the back door.

INT. CANDLE'S KITCHEN NIGHT

There are two doors in the kitchen, a red door and a blue door. The children walk through the red door.

JACK

What are we going to eat?

Candle scratches her head.

CANDLE

Something.

JACK

What?

CANDLE

I don't know something.

JACK

Mary could get something to eat.

CANDLE

No! Something out there wants to eat her.

JACK

That is not true.

CANDLE

Yes it is true. Go call your mom. She'll tell you.

MARY

What is going to eat us?

Candle and Jack look at each other.

CANDLE

No one. It is a story for babies.

JACK

It's real.

CANDLE

My dad would tell me about it. It never happens though. It is just a-

JACK

(Interrupts)
It's real.

CANDLE

No it's not Jack.

JACK

You remember Jenny?

A naked, YOUNG WOMAN appears behind Jack. She wears a hospital gown and is covered in blood.

MARY

Yes?

The Young Woman grabs Jack's throat.

JACK

It happened to her.

INT. CANDLE'S LIVING ROOM NIGHT

The children play cards on a coffee table. An empty box of crackers sits next to them. Candle reaches for the box. A cockroach crawls out of the box.

CANDLE

Oh. I'll go throw this away. Jack can you help me?

JACK

Why? I'm a guest. You should help me.

CANDLE

Get over here idiot.

Candle pulls Jack towards the room's back door.

INT. CANDLE'S KITCHEN NIGHT

Candle and Jack enter the kitchen through the kitchen's blue door.

CANDLE

You are a jerk.

JACK

Why?

CANDLE

Stop being stupid.

JACK

What? You lied to her.

CANDLE

I am not a liar.

JACK

You told her no one eats children.

Jack sticks his tongue out.

JACK

That's a lie. Your father eats children.

CANDLE

No he doesn't!

JACK

I've seen him do it.

Mary enters.

MARY

How?

CANDLE

Where did you come from?

MARY

The door.
Mary points at the red door.

JACK

So you know how I go on camp outs sometimes?

CANDLE

No.

JACK

Well I do.

Candle walks to the fridge and pulls out an apple.

JACK

Excuse me?

CANDLE

Go on.

JACK

Well one time I woke up early. It was in the morning. Then as I was walking around there was red sticky stuff. I thought it was cool looking so then I followed it. And after a while there was a bunch of white stuff, rock like stuff. So then I picked it up. And then I found it.

MARY

What?

JACK

A half eaten coyote.

CANDLE

That's not a kid.

JACK

The story's not finished stupid.

Candle takes her apple over to the sink. She opens a drawer and takes out a knife. She waves the knife at Jack.

CANDLE

What? No one is stopping you.

JACK

Well after poking the body with a stick. I then put it on a stick and dragged back to the campsite. Then I heard screaming. I thought it was because of the coyote. When I got back to the campsite. I saw it.

MARY

What?
Candle jams her knife into the apple.

CANDLE

He's not going to tell you.

JACK

I'm going to tell her.

CANDLE

No you're not because nothing happened.

Candle struggles to remove the knife from the apple.

CANDLE

If something had happened you would have told us by now.

JACK

I'm trying but you keep interrupting me.

Candle turns to face Jack. Jack stares back.

CANDLE

You didn't see anything!

JACK

It was a kid. It was some little kid strung to our flag pole by his organs. Half his body was just gone. Or everywhere I'm not sure which. He painted our campsite.

A white head appears behind Candle.

MARY

That's like my nightmares.

Jack looks at the floor.

JACK

I imagine your nightmares would be about teddy bears. This was real. It was watching us.
A white head moves to the window behind Candle.

CANDLE

What? Teddy bears?

JACK

No, it was your father. In his long suit. He moved with the trees.

A loud knocking occurs. Candle grabs the knife. The children run toward the red door. A bowl of sliced apples sits on the counter.

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