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Ban-Anad BananaGod
Posts : 6603 Join date : 2011-02-12 Age : 32
| Subject: Prometheus Unbound Sat Sep 22, 2012 1:42 pm | |
| So I got around to starting the story arc that will serve as something of a prologue to Ban's involvement in Olympus, and the whole thing in general. Here you'll only get to see the cover page, as the thing will get rather long, but you will be able to read the whole thing on my dA page... Just click the cover image...
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Captain Kloud GD Member
Posts : 40 Join date : 2012-09-16 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: Prometheus Unbound Sat Sep 22, 2012 2:05 pm | |
| as God, i hear you scream. | |
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Ban-Anad BananaGod
Posts : 6603 Join date : 2011-02-12 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Prometheus Unbound Sat Sep 22, 2012 2:11 pm | |
| - Captain Kloud wrote:
- as God, i hear you scream.
Please reserve your posts for creative criticism... Thank you. | |
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Scott Warlord
Posts : 11279 Join date : 2011-01-26 Age : 35 Location : Burkman's attic... drilling...
| Subject: Re: Prometheus Unbound Sat Sep 22, 2012 4:46 pm | |
| I read it... not much thus far... but definitely catchy and uses good descriptions. My only suggestion... that beginning part with Kara's recording... I... I think I got confused a little with it. Maybe chop it up into more paragraphs? | |
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Branch The Fabulous
Posts : 7918 Join date : 2011-01-27 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Prometheus Unbound Sat Sep 22, 2012 6:25 pm | |
| Heil grammar! You said "witch to enforce" | |
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Ban-Anad BananaGod
Posts : 6603 Join date : 2011-02-12 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Prometheus Unbound Sat Sep 22, 2012 7:56 pm | |
| - Branch wrote:
- Heil grammar! You said "witch to enforce"
Well, fuck me with a Brussels sprout... And this version is already obsolete due to edits done on the train... I'll be re-uploading the new version in the next day or so... Hopefully the entire first chapter. The whole thing, if we're lucky and I get an uninterrupted spasm of inspiration... | |
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Ban-Anad BananaGod
Posts : 6603 Join date : 2011-02-12 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Prometheus Unbound Sat Sep 22, 2012 8:03 pm | |
| Just to make it clear- Zeus is the guy heading Olympus... We've discussed it before... Kinda 'duuh', but I felt like I needed to reiterate...
Also- there's a catch with Jeremy. 10 internet cookies to whoever figures it out first!
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CollaWars Arcane Warrior
Posts : 3071 Join date : 2011-01-31 Age : 28 Location : Delocated
| Subject: Re: Prometheus Unbound Sat Sep 22, 2012 8:06 pm | |
| Your name is Evangelium Olympus? | |
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Ban-Anad BananaGod
Posts : 6603 Join date : 2011-02-12 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Prometheus Unbound Sat Sep 22, 2012 8:11 pm | |
| - CollaWars wrote:
- Your name is Evangelium Olympus?
No, you idiot... In Latin (yes, I know Latin) Evangelium can be used to substitute a story from the life of someone. It's a synonym to 'Gospel', although that refers to that dude named Jesus in particular. An Evangelium is not required to deal with religion or one set person in particular... I also like how it sounds... Fanceh. | |
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CollaWars Arcane Warrior
Posts : 3071 Join date : 2011-01-31 Age : 28 Location : Delocated
| Subject: Re: Prometheus Unbound Sat Sep 22, 2012 8:14 pm | |
| - Ban-Anad wrote:
- CollaWars wrote:
- Your name is Evangelium Olympus?
No, you idiot... In Latin (yes, I know Latin) Evangelium can be used to substitute a story from the life of someone. It's a synonym to 'Gospel', although that refers to that dude named Jesus in particular. An Evangelium is not required to deal with religion or one set person in particular... I also like how it sounds... Fanceh. You should read in Latin to your twins, it'll take you places. | |
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Ban-Anad BananaGod
Posts : 6603 Join date : 2011-02-12 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Prometheus Unbound Sat Sep 22, 2012 8:26 pm | |
| - CollaWars wrote:
- Ban-Anad wrote:
- CollaWars wrote:
- Your name is Evangelium Olympus?
No, you idiot... In Latin (yes, I know Latin) Evangelium can be used to substitute a story from the life of someone. It's a synonym to 'Gospel', although that refers to that dude named Jesus in particular. An Evangelium is not required to deal with religion or one set person in particular... I also like how it sounds... Fanceh. You should read in Latin to your twins, it'll take you places. We do... Other Latin stuff... | |
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Ban-Anad BananaGod
Posts : 6603 Join date : 2011-02-12 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Prometheus Unbound Sun Sep 23, 2012 4:27 pm | |
| First Chapter's finished! Updating the image link as well! | |
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Scott Warlord
Posts : 11279 Join date : 2011-01-26 Age : 35 Location : Burkman's attic... drilling...
| Subject: Re: Prometheus Unbound Sun Sep 23, 2012 6:20 pm | |
| Very nice start... how old is Ban at this point in time? | |
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Ban-Anad BananaGod
Posts : 6603 Join date : 2011-02-12 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Prometheus Unbound Mon Sep 24, 2012 4:37 am | |
| - Scott wrote:
- Very nice start... how old is Ban at this point in time?
This happens around 2285-86. So he's... 47. But due to his weird aging, he appears around 50... | |
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Scott Warlord
Posts : 11279 Join date : 2011-01-26 Age : 35 Location : Burkman's attic... drilling...
| Subject: Re: Prometheus Unbound Mon Sep 24, 2012 10:47 am | |
| - Ban-Anad wrote:
- Scott wrote:
- Very nice start... how old is Ban at this point in time?
This happens around 2285-86. So he's... 47. But due to his weird aging, he appears around 50... So... spring chicken compared to modern day... :P | |
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Ban-Anad BananaGod
Posts : 6603 Join date : 2011-02-12 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Prometheus Unbound Mon Sep 24, 2012 11:17 am | |
| - Scott wrote:
- Ban-Anad wrote:
- Scott wrote:
- Very nice start... how old is Ban at this point in time?
This happens around 2285-86. So he's... 47. But due to his weird aging, he appears around 50... So... spring chicken compared to modern day... :P Wat? | |
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